Rate my rap please!!!?

wow ur creative! well i like the last part from starting at "stay true to myself" till the end the best. the beginning is kinda funny. Raps are better when you really put emotions, meanings and metaphors in there. but yeah yours is good! i can imagine it in my mind. it starts off like a funny rap, but then it gets meaningful, and better. score of 1-10......: 8.5!